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Main : ! 3D Art ! : Original Characters :  Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado

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Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado
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SubmitterStarChildMore Photos from StarChild   Last Update2013/1/4 19:01
Hits987  Comments4    
One of the many deceased unicorn characters. I know previously i posted death cards in copper but after looking back decided that it took away from the overall image too much.

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StarChild
Posted: 2013/1/6 22:48  Updated: 2013/1/6 22:48
Shaper of Worlds
Joined: 2004/4/5
From: Matteson, Il
Posts: 3908
 Re: Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado
thanx B. see. that's why i run these by you guys so that when i eventually re-open Unicorn Web and post these i'll have all those issues ironed out. thanx. and now that you mention it he does look like one of the Sons of the Tiger. This is the first time i've ever presented him in color and that color scheme never occurred to me.
Kem-Ta / K'un L'un ...extra-dimentional temples that fade in and out of reality for short periods of time...yeah. that's one i'm gonna have to admit to.
B
Posted: 2013/1/6 17:08  Updated: 2013/1/6 17:08
The New Number 2 (Moderator-Like Guy)
Joined: 2004/5/16
From: Kamloops, BC, Canada
Posts: 1366
 Re: Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado
If we're talking about writing advice, I'd kinda suggest you start by attending to the typos: preists, monastary, thier, mstical...

Fun punchy-kicky character. The backstory has elements of Iron Fist's (Kem-Ta = K'un L'un) and the design is very reminiscent of Marvel's Sons of the Tiger (ironically).
StarChild
Posted: 2013/1/5 23:00  Updated: 2013/1/5 23:00
Shaper of Worlds
Joined: 2004/4/5
From: Matteson, Il
Posts: 3908
 Re: Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado
good point P. hadn't noticed that until now.will go back and correct it for future reference. thanx for viewing.
pijon
Posted: 2013/1/5 19:57  Updated: 2013/1/5 19:57
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 Re: Unicorn 30 in 30-Day Three - Karado
Another excellent character and card. Just a little writing advice... you might want to avoid conveying the same information with the same word so close together. Those last two sentences read "... sons of the tiger threatened to crucify him on an electric cross. As a result he was crucified..." I think you would be better served to go with something like "... sons of the tiger threatened him to a prolonged and torturous death. As a result he was fatally crucified on an electric cross by their hand."