Re: Check it out - Unlimited Evil

Posted by darth_paul on 2013/1/10 6:15:04

Thanks for the open and honest critique Star. This whole comic has been a huge learning experience for me, and since it's my first major comic effort I am indeed learning from my mistakes, such as how you pointed out that I've thrown probably way too many characters into it without letting anyone really get a feel for who is who. Unfortunately, the next issue will have even more characters introduced, but I shall take your suggestions to heart and try not to overwhelm and will try to rein things back a bit if I can so that each of the characters are more memorable and it's clear which side everyone is on. I am glad to read from you that the story reads good overall though and that you are looking forward to the next issue.