Re: Check it out - Unlimited Evil
Posted by pijon on 2013/1/14 17:45:46
It's about damned time you put it all together for the comic section! I think I enjoyed this even more the 2nd time around. 
... although part of that may be my new larger monitor so now I can see what things actually are supposed to look like. 
I think Star really brings up an important point and one I probably would've missed in my enthusiasm. Because I'm familiar with your biosheets, I knew all these characters to some degree. I hadn't even considered how you were throwing all these new characters into the story because they weren't so new to me. It really is better form not to presume your audience is familiar with the characters. So I can see where one might be confused by your dizzying array of heroes and villains. Still. doing comics ain't easy and you've started some really epic storyline here. It's a very ambitious effort and in large part a successful one. Good job! Keep going!!
... although part of that may be my new larger monitor so now I can see what things actually are supposed to look like. I think Star really brings up an important point and one I probably would've missed in my enthusiasm. Because I'm familiar with your biosheets, I knew all these characters to some degree. I hadn't even considered how you were throwing all these new characters into the story because they weren't so new to me. It really is better form not to presume your audience is familiar with the characters. So I can see where one might be confused by your dizzying array of heroes and villains. Still. doing comics ain't easy and you've started some really epic storyline here. It's a very ambitious effort and in large part a successful one. Good job! Keep going!! This Post was from: http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/newbb/viewtopic.php?forum=1&topic_id=3281&post_id=37835