a work in progress needs feedback

Posted by DarqueImages on 2014/5/19 19:15:03

I don't normal make requests like this here, but I need some up-votes and some feedback. I submitted a chapter of something I've been working on to creepypasta.com and admin posted it on their sister site (I'm assuming they didn't think it was good enough for the main site). Hop on over, give it a read, give it a review,point out any flaws (any feedback is good), and give it an up-vote (please).

And if you truly want a little insight into my warped and twisted mind, you definitely want to read it.

http://www.crappypasta.com/decayed-tale-newly-undead/