Re: Tome of Thaynes

Posted by Winterhawk on 2007/4/21 9:26:33

first impressions on the picture were really good no major issue's. I don't really see a different style it is easily recognizable as a Thayne drawing to me and looks very similar to your body of work up to this point. As for a critique here you go I only see two problems with the image. 1 his bat ears and 2 his right arm.
Basically the left bat ear seems to be at a slightly different part of his head compared to the bat ear on the right also it appears to me to be at a slightly different angle.
Now his right arm. it seems to be missing completely. Batman didn't listen to Astar and Play safe. and doesn't have a limb.
the missing arm thing isn't even noticeable at first. but even if the arm was behind him it would effect the cape more and the shoulder would look different.

overall the picture is pretty good, ...It could use a background...but that is no big deal, it would be easy enough to add in a night sky when coloring..if it ever evolves that far.