Get thee to a Nunnery

Posted by Biohaz_Daddy on 2007/6/22 11:58:42

Cool, 3 new images!!!

The Nun - Your line work is nice and precise. Her habit is believable, excluding the missing arms. With the level of precision on the line, I would expect to see a more fully realized concept (read: one that includes expressive arms and hands). You used a little too much cartoon short-hand on her face as well (imho). I am assuming that you were attempting a sensitive portrait. A realistic facial portrait would go a long way to communicate that sensitivity.

Hulk#1- Great emotive pose, and there is a high energy to the drawing. It's huge to be able to draw emotion. While rage is likely the not the most difficult, it is important to be able to achieve it. Particularly within comics. Luckily it works with the pose. The pose is somewhat awkward. It wouldn't have much power... well it wouldn't for the rest of us who aren't the Hulk. There are some anatomical issues as well, specifically at the hips, and his forward wrist.

Hulk#2- This one has put a nice finish to the original. I like how you are finishing with these clean lines on the last couple of images.