Re: Issue Number 2 is out
Posted by co_04 on 2009/9/2 9:07:26
Your narrative and story read very well. Nice and fluid, but my only gripe is the size of the format. It is too large for the screen and I have to keep scrolling around this and that to read it.
Other than that it is easy to follow and gets to the point. It was hard for me to follow as individual posts (I have ADD). Interesting introduction to characters (especially Miss V, heh! heh!) and criminality.
Have you considered writing for comics professionally, sir?
Other than that it is easy to follow and gets to the point. It was hard for me to follow as individual posts (I have ADD). Interesting introduction to characters (especially Miss V, heh! heh!) and criminality.
Have you considered writing for comics professionally, sir?
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