HELP!!! URGENT!
Posted by ReddEra on 2009/8/10 2:41:26
OK, Hellfire club members will be able to see the images.
When these are done I'll post them in the normal Gallery...I think. So I'm sorry none hellfire club members you won't be able to help.
Here's my tiff, I'm doing a six page consecutive. I don't feel it's dynamic enough and the third page has been done THREE times now. it just doesn't feel right.
So at 5:23 am I stopped what I was doing. I'm posting an urgent HELP! here so I can get some suggestions from the wonderful members.
page 1
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1853
page 2
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1855
page 3
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1857
so the story so far is:
Security Guard in nowhere Virginia at top secret research lab is walking to his lone car at the end of a graveyard shift. dead man missing eye attacks said guard (Jacobs) and chokes him to death.
The next morning Jacobs walks into work.
The guard booth guy says" Hey, man I thought you were off. OK well go in" Saying hi and checking Jacobs ID tag. Jacobs is quiet and blank faced. the other guard does not notice the choke bruises on Jacobs neck.
Jacobs enters the building and proceeds to a door he is not authorized to enter. He walks up to the guards. They say hi and tell him to turn back. The one who speaks is the same man as the dead man from before only alive with both eyes. Jacobs fatally fires at both men. Shooting the one from before in the eye that was missing before, thus killing him. He also shoots the other guard in the head with no time for him to react.
Next page*
He then enters into a top secret, highly restricted lab with two scientist, a man and a woman. When they try to stop him he shoots both of them as he approaches a strange machine. Pulling levers, and pressing all the right buttons the dead Jacobs watches as the container like dragon clawed machine starts up. Everything turns to white light and....
you'll see.
ok. So when it comes to art I need some help with the third page. I think it's the bottom panel but I also don't like the middle ones. please help.
When these are done I'll post them in the normal Gallery...I think. So I'm sorry none hellfire club members you won't be able to help.
Here's my tiff, I'm doing a six page consecutive. I don't feel it's dynamic enough and the third page has been done THREE times now. it just doesn't feel right.
So at 5:23 am I stopped what I was doing. I'm posting an urgent HELP! here so I can get some suggestions from the wonderful members.
page 1
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1853
page 2
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1855
page 3
http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum0/photo.php?lid=1857
so the story so far is:
Security Guard in nowhere Virginia at top secret research lab is walking to his lone car at the end of a graveyard shift. dead man missing eye attacks said guard (Jacobs) and chokes him to death.
The next morning Jacobs walks into work.
The guard booth guy says" Hey, man I thought you were off. OK well go in" Saying hi and checking Jacobs ID tag. Jacobs is quiet and blank faced. the other guard does not notice the choke bruises on Jacobs neck.
Jacobs enters the building and proceeds to a door he is not authorized to enter. He walks up to the guards. They say hi and tell him to turn back. The one who speaks is the same man as the dead man from before only alive with both eyes. Jacobs fatally fires at both men. Shooting the one from before in the eye that was missing before, thus killing him. He also shoots the other guard in the head with no time for him to react.
Next page*
He then enters into a top secret, highly restricted lab with two scientist, a man and a woman. When they try to stop him he shoots both of them as he approaches a strange machine. Pulling levers, and pressing all the right buttons the dead Jacobs watches as the container like dragon clawed machine starts up. Everything turns to white light and....
you'll see.
ok. So when it comes to art I need some help with the third page. I think it's the bottom panel but I also don't like the middle ones. please help.
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