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Guardian of the Great White North (Webmaster) Joined: 2003/8/17 10:44 From Canada Posts: 6812 Level : 57; EXP : 32 HP : 281 / 1408 MP : 2270 / 85131	Hey everyone. A great new comic book has been added to our comic section. Don't wait check out this book Now!!!!!!! Pure Awesomeness! Posted on: 30 03 10 09:25 pm
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Moderator Joined: 2006/7/18 19:52 From United States Posts: 6363 Level : 56; EXP : 3 HP : 275 / 1375 MP : 2121 / 71429	AMAZING WORK, bud!! I had the pleasure of watching this develop and I gotta say, to see it complete with the easy navigation of HM's comic section, it really is a most impressive work. Great story, terrific art, humor, hot babes and action galore!! Hawk said it best... it's awesome, EVERYBODY needs to check this out NOW!!! Posted on: 31 03 10 08:29 pm

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Dreamcatcher Joined: 2008/7/20 17:11 From The Dream Dimension Posts: 1451 Level : 32; EXP : 60 HP : 0 / 790 MP : 483 / 36389	Fantastic comic! This story has everything I love about comics. Hot babes! Action! Hotbabes! Intrigue! Hot babes! Character development! Hot babes! and humor! Oh did I mention there's also hot babes? This is a badass comic, I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Posted on: 31 03 10 10:42 pm
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Kling on HM (WebMaster!) Joined: 2004/7/19 7:51 From My Box Posts: 6982 Level : 57; EXP : 79 HP : 283 / 1419 MP : 2327 / 82018	I am going to have to agree that this is a really well done comic!!! My only nitpick is that it seems that there is a lot of text telling the story which mucks up the pages. Granted, you couldn't have done what you did with this comic without the text, but it just seems like there is almost too much. That doesn't make sense does it? Anywho... great job!!!!!!!! Posted on: 2 04 10 09:23 am
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Shaper of Worlds Joined: 2004/4/5 2:41 From Matteson, Il Posts: 3909 Level : 47; EXP : 34 HP : 231 / 1158 MP : 1303 / 67900	i have to agree with ya JR. tightening up the dialouge was a major issue in making this comic...next time i'll try to let the pictures tell the story more than the words. thanks for reading and commenting. Posted on: 2 04 10 03:30 pm
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	Re: Brand New Comic - Double Play #3	#6
Gold Member Joined: 2008/11/4 18:41 From Indiana, yeah, Indiana, stop laughing Posts: 1474 Level : 32; EXP : 80 HP : 0 / 795 MP : 491 / 35945	Looks real good! As was said, great story, characters, hot babes, etc. So I'll comment more on the composition to avoid redundancy... Great composition! The individual panels are set up nicely to compose interesting pages, and the pages come together equally nicely for the whole comic. Varying camera angles, "mirrored" viewpoints and panel symmetry used excellently to compose each page uniquely! Vibrant use of colors as well. Only minor technicalities I saw were minuscule poke-throughs, but not many at that. And those definitely did not take anything away from the excellent artwork, posing, hot babes, action, drama, suspense...and all the other stuff that made this awesome. Very well done! I agree, a must-see for everyone. Thanks for posting this for us !! Posted on: 3 04 10 08:54 pm
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