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Any Suggestions For This WIP?
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Hi. I'm working on a Green Arrow & Black Canary pic and hit that wall! Not sure what's missing or what I can do to improve the image. Any tips, comments, observations are greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Posted on: 2 07 13 02:29 pm
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Re: Any Suggestions For This WIP?
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The City background is too open in regards to the characters.

Posted on: 2 07 13 05:09 pm
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Ok I'm not a pro... but here goes... probably putting a baddie on one of the building across them, and having Green Arrow about to arrow the baddie and have canary screaming at another baddie also across from them...

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Lord knows there's any number of interesting possibilities so let me start by saying go with your gut... what feels right to you is probably what will make you happiest and it sounds like you have a plan... although IMO, the greater distance reduces the drama. I would say putting your baddies up close and personal would increase the drama... say having just head and arms of one baddie charging from screen right toward Ollie, who's facing him and just placing arrow into bow (slightly lowered) and smiling confidently while Dinah is screaming the other baddie out of the scene with just some arms and legs showing from screen left as he is blown backwards. I think if you put baddies on the building across, heroes heads are turned away, making viewers less able to identify with them. Just a thought.

Posted on: 3 07 13 02:29 am
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Thanks, that never occured to me. I'll take that into consideration!

Posted on: 3 07 13 12:19 pm
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Thanks for the ideas, I love your facebook page by the way!

Posted on: 3 07 13 12:20 pm
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Great ideas! Thanks

Posted on: 3 07 13 12:22 pm
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Awesome input HEROMORPHERS! Got alot of great ideas and advice to work with. Thanks!

Posted on: 3 07 13 12:25 pm
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