| Re: Check it out - Unlimited Evil |
Subject: Re: Check it out - Unlimited Evil
by StarChild on 2013/1/9 20:26:42
first of all i want to congratulate Paul for finishing this book. i remember seeing his first few pages wayy back when and applaud your efforts at presenting a rather enjoyable story. You took the time to present a lot of information to set up the story arc even if some of the dialogue was a bit long-winded. i must admit i was a bit overwhelmed by all the characters you debuted in this issue but while that was a good thing, you did little to introduce them to the audience. at the end of the day, the only one i could truly remember was Nova. And during the opening battle i had no idea who the good guys were and who the villains were. There's a couple other things i would suggest but just minor nits. It was a good read and i look forward to the next issue.
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