| Re: I Challenge YOU, voltron2000... |
Subject: Re: I Challenge YOU, voltron2000...
by Tartanninja on 2007/1/2 19:59:15
Thanks to both BB3 and Voltron for letting me be a part of the judging.
BB3-
A good clean look to the render. The action in the shot is well composed. I like the lens flare. In the comics it would white out a panel. (I have the whole BB series in my comic collection.) The spit coming out of the gorilla's mouth is a great touch as well.
Your 'implied motion' in She-Hulk's arm swing looks off. Your blur caught the building and the powerlines. You put an excellent expresion on She-Hulk's face, but Blue Beetle has a flat expression. I'd imagine him with gritted teeth or a twisted in a yell. He looks like he's thinking about doing the dishes rather than the fact that he's battling a large gorilla.
Voltron-
The look on Blue Beetle's face is great. The cat almost seems to mirror BB's face. The humor in this render is great! BB's running pose is also well done. The word balloons help finish out what the story is about, whish is a nice touch.
The way BB is holding the cat looks odd. Posing the front legs so they are over BB's arm would look more natural. The explosions seem to come from nowhere. I'm sure they are coming from the ship, but I can't see where they tie in. She-Hulk is off in the distance, so the two characters don't seem to have equal time in the picture.
This was a tough call, but my vote goes to BB3.
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