Hey Heromorphers,

Our fellow heromorpher Obsidian has a really cool comic story he wants to share with us.

Click below, enjoy and let him know what you think here on this thread.

Good to see you in the funny pages, Obsidian! Good job on the comic too. Very slick, strong work on graphics and production.

I learned a lot since my earliest days here, and I've grown as a person and an artist and i like to think it shows

That it does.

Clearly, and very helpful, My latest post again using what you've taught me...

Very kick it in the butt!
Well written and your art fits right in. Great work!!

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Since you'd mentioned to me that I was one of the first folk you'd met online, I feel qualified to judge. Yeah, I thought you were a bright promising upstart when you'd arrived but you're well beyond that. Heck, I'd like to think I've progressed a lot since then but now you're teaching me new things these days! A remarkable level of advancement! It really shows in the work.

Thanks bro, that means a lot to me, I really knuckled down after taking some serious critique on here but I'm better for the experience. I bumped heads with the Admins and I know that despite the new moniker they all know who I am by now and they have seen fit to let bygones be bygones and in all it's very much appreciated.

Well I finally got around to reading this comic that I have anticipated for some time. Seeing your image posts of Obsidian Mask has geared me up for the eventual comic book debut [this is an Obsidian Mask comic isn't it? I assumed that was him on the cover]. Although I have no official printed credits I consider myself somewhat of an authority on putting together an independent comic. There were elements of this comic that I liked [the larger panels, the panoramic views, your attention to detail and the thorough background information you supplied] and while this isn't a negative, when I reached the end of the book I wasn't aware that it was the end [it was the end wasn't it?]..should have been something there to let the reader know that this issue was over..to be continued or maybe a preview of the next issue's title. I see you invested a lot of writing into this issue but no action [would have been nice to see the star do a little sumthin, if only for a panel or two]
While I have no doubt that we have just scratched the surface of this storyline and there will no doubt be action galore forthcoming..its always a win/win when you leave the reader with a cliffhanger of sorts. You know really give them a reason to come back or buy issue #2 if that be the case.
With that being said I like this and will be eagerly awaiting the next episode and the eventual appearance of Bypass.

Thanks ever so much for those kind words. I will answer a few questions to make things a bit clearer

1: Yes this is Obsidian Mask's comic
2: No this wasn't over by a Long Shot I stopped where I did because this was strictly a preview to generate feedback which has been entirely positive.
3: Yes there is plenty of action, sorry for the elongated setup. This is a comic book adaptation of a novel I'm writing by the same name that is currently at 320 pages and 29 chapters. If you were reading the novel you'd be some 30 pages in by now. The story does start slow but I promise it ebbs and flows wonderfully with lots of action.
4: Bypass will be making his appearance in the next installment.
I hope that answers all of your questions for now. Think of this work as a combination, Detective/Hero/Space Opera book. With a touch of Romance thrown in for good measure.

Hello, I just wanted to say that I have three new pages for this comic would it be possible to update?

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Sure thing. Just send them my way and I'll take care of that.

Comic Updated with NEW Cover AND extra pages!
Enjoy & Leave a comment here!!!!

it looks really good the the cover didn't change though...it's okay it's not that important.

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Yes, it did: Cover.
Try refresh your browser page and if necessary, clear your cookies. And look again.

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Nope that link is the old cover.

http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum4/photo.php?lid=22575

This is the new cover

Again: Clear your browser's cookies, and history.
Refresh page.
Click link I posted above(or below, on my last reply), it's the cover of your comic, the new one.
Read the comic and you'll see there as well the new cover.

I have seen the changes on my phone but they're not showing up on my PC which can only mean the problem is on my end. I've tried clearing my browser but I'm not getting any results...well as long as everyone else can see it I guess it's okay. I can live with it.

Got it...now it's right...stupid cached images. I apologize for the confusions and annoyance thanks for being so cool about it. As I said many times before you rock OCP

2900 views...that is awesome but I could use some feedback comic fans...how do you like the new, more complete ending? Are the graphics up to snuff, just any old thing you wanna say...maybe you have questions about where this is all going, or if there will be more?