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Jeffson's Sketches
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I started this as a general sketch of some chicks ass. One of the critiques most often given about my work is the "anorexic" nature of the women, so I've been trying to draw them with a bit more meat on them and a few more dynamic poses.

This was supposed to be a five minute sketch. I've been working on it for about a week now.



Yeah. I know. Her ass is huge.

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The fact it is headless is a little disconcerting, but as to the rest I have to say...

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WoW, that's a very hot body neat pose ,hoverbikes not to bad either!

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something about the leg behind the bike kinda bothers me. it just kinda disappears further up. To me at least.

Also, I keep looking at the bike and my eyes say three quarter view. Then I look at the gun on the front and my eyes say total side view. Same thing with the console. I either want to pull it down and right a lil or hide it more.

Just out of curiosity. The dots in the back. What are they for?

Not tryin to dog your work. Just sharing thoughts.

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I like the bike, it's very "Grendel: War Child"...

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The leg was just a missed line, but I see what your saying about the control panel (although the gatling does match the angle of the console). It's actually the tail of the bike that's throwing it off.

I subsequently scrapped this drawing because of the numerous little fuckups spread throughout. I like the concept, but this wasn't a very good execution...

Oh, and the dots at the end were reference points for the exhaust. Those were going to be put on in Photoshop...

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It's a big one.

(link was damaged by imageshack - I don't recall what the image was anymore.)

Feel free to add color if you'd like. Everything is pretty well blank so you can add whatever costume design you want...

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Back to the first sketch, her spine seems to be bent uncomfortably. It looks like the kind of exaggerated humping only a contortionist can do. Other than that, I'd say you captured the non anorexic woman pretty well w/o going too overboard. oh yeah, I disagree with thane on the angles of the console and gatling gun, I think the match up pretty well with everything.

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That's the reason I scrapped it. I'll probably go back to concept sometime in the future, but lately I've been having more fun with sketchier styles...

Thanks much for the critique! :D

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Uh! is there any reason why this wasn't posted and discussed in the Hellfire gallery? It's kind of hard to really view the sketch in this forum.

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We need to make up my mind here. I was told that this forum was specifically for posting sketches. Everytime I come back here another set of rules has changed...

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Also, there's no such thing as a Hellfire Gallery...

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You should be able to use the Hellfire Club section to upload stuff to if you want. I think it's there with Gold member access - if you can't see it/get to it, I'd suggest you pm someone.

Also, your link to an imageshack file a few posts below is messed up, and causes a 403 error, and can crash Explorer.

I'd like to see it, since I may try a bit of coloring over Christmas break, and am looking for stuff to do as a novice.

edit: tried the linkie again, still a no go for some reason...anyone else have luck?

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this forum is for sketches. and talking about them.

The hellfire gallery is for works in progress as well and is
for artists the are gold members or members of the hellfire
club to post to get feedback before the images go public or for
artists of the before mentioned group to post orignial art
that they do not want to be public access.

These rules have been the same since both hellfire and this
forum have been created.

Also, please ignore members asking you to do things in a
certain way if they are not heralds or moderators.

I hope that clears things up for you jeffson as we have not had
any actual rule changes here for a very long time.

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Thank you for the clarification. I like being able to post stuff here rather that the HFC (which doesn't exist - or does it..?) because I don't like eating up server storage for stuff that isn't really finished, or won't be finished. Linking to it is just more efficient.

Also, not sure what happened with that link down below. Went to check it at imageshack and the link was still there, but the picture was gone. I notice they've been doing that quite a bit lately. I removed the link from that posting so that should stop any future crashes. Let me know if any of the other ones stop working.

To make up for it, anyone needing something to color could go to work on this if they want...(I have a finished version up in the comic gallery somewhere, but you're welcome to take a shot at it if you'd like.)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6863/sketch6as9.jpg

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