I've written a fan fiction based upon the 1981 Batman story "To Kill a Legend". To summarize it Batman of Earth-1 is Transported by the Phantom Stranger to a universe with no Krypton and no superheroes, the Earth-One Batman prevents the murders of the Earth-Five versions of his parents and inspires this Earth's Bruce Wayne to grow up to become Batman.

This story I'm working on is a prologue to a sequel to that story. I'm not satisfied by what I've written, and I'd like some advice on putting on the final touches. Any input would be appreciated. Just ask me to send you a copy of what I've written. I hope to hear from someone soon, as I think this is a very promising premise.