Not sure I am going to make it. Its almost there but its just not quite what I wanted. There's something missing that would help drive the origin along to where I really want it to go.
Glad to see your posts! I just posted mine up and look forward to reading everyone else's here shortly.
As for posting the powers here, the intent of the contest was to see how your story told the way the powers functioned, but posting them here if you want to be more specific is fine as well. Hawk's format works perfectly and can also look like this:
Patriot 1. Control Kinetic Energy 2. Nightstalking/Shadow Melding 3. Swingline (works like the movie Spider-man's webs but looks more like sinues than web)
Posted on: 19 04 09 10:49 am
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Some days it just isn't worth chewing through the restraints.
All the stories have been read. the Judges have Voted. and after the dust settled the Winning story was............
Patriot.
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