Niiiice. Lots of good stuff going on here with the modelling, poses, effects and composition. The fist of love (so to speak...) looks great. Minor niggle: it'd work better if the glows showed up on the environment... ie, the ground where Hal's kneeling should be tinted green, etc. As it is, the characters feel pasted on top of the background rather than placed in it.
Very impressive work, my friend! Great characters, scene, poses, textures, FX... all of the pieces look great and come together in perfect bit of storytelling. Outstanding!