Very good! I'm seeing a number of improvements here... not just removing the glowing trim but a really strong archer's pose too. You've even got the hand poses right. Still, I do agree with Star that the arrow is pulled too far back and the string could be more taut. There should also be feathers on the arrow's shaft. Still, excellent work, good improvement.
well i like that youve taken the glow away from his uniform..now lets work on adjusting that bow and arrow..drawn wayyy too far back with not enough tension on the string