I really like the layout a great deal. Characters, poses, lighting... all top notch stuff. It's a great scene and it's very well done although the part standing out to me would be the textures... the trees, roots and skull don't quite have textures that rise to the level of the rest (and made more noticeable by closeness to camera). Still the characters and action and suspense are what sells these you've really got that in great numbers here.