Much better.

Now that you guys mentioned all the "nitpicks" I will definately go back and Update this pic.

B nitpicks to try and help artists improve by letting them know the little details they may want to watch out for in future work. Being nitpicked at was how he figured out this manipping thing back in the day. Being a jerk is only a convenient side benefit.

Oh, and they're right about the dagger cutout -- it has the same issue as the circle around the eye, ie, it doesn't match the contours of her body.

Fantastic job, daswook.

But what really makes me happy is to see you not afraid to work on whites like you do here.

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and the left part of the dagger isn't the same as the right.

other than that this is a great job!!

B always nitpicks on manips, of course he doesn't do it to be a dick (or does he? ) and I'd have to agree with what he's pointed out. You're much braver than I, because I don't think I've ever tried manipping WHITE. I've wanted to do a cloak & dagger piece, but the idea of manipping that white has always kept me from it.

Now.. I'm going to point out one other thing that B hasn't. The "dagger" part cut out of the costume. Its a nice go at it, but there's something off about it. The angles seem a bit too sharp and should rather be following hte curvature of the body and I see a little too much shadowing underneath on the side that has the most lighting. Other than that abd what B pointed out, I can't really nitpick. Nicely done.

Great pose, great model, great backlighting.

nicely done cloak and dagger has always been my one of my favorite comics

Yeah, Cloak & Dagger are a great visual, aren't they?

Another nice pic. Great work on the costume -- white is not easy to manip, and you've done it very well. The main issue here is the mark around her eye, which doesn't conform to her face at all. That can be fixed in several ways; transform>warp is probably the easiest, displace or liquefy would also work. Also, the hair. I know, I know: one-track mind. It's better here than in the Supergirl pic, but still a bit too solid and opaque; I'd run over the ends with an eraser at low opacity to make it slightly transparent and blend it in better.