I really like your work, Mr. R! Rebecca (or Keira) and Jennifer were beautiful choices. The composition is great. The lightning has some problems though. I believe you applied some kind of fog but it changed what you did before as we can see in Jennifer's boots and shadow. Also, you could reshape some of the ninja's expressions, huh? I'll tell you what: a 9 from me!
Don't be mad with me! I'm telling this because I truly admire your techniques, gentleman!