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| thor2000 |
Posted: 2006/12/16 9:21 Updated: 2006/12/16 9:21 |
sidekick   Joined: 2006/12/13 From: Tennessee Posts: 75 |
 Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room Jayna used to be a favorite subject of mine too and going by the pic, It looks as if she went through puberty just fine!
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| Dark Wanderer |
Posted: 2006/11/4 2:23 Updated: 2006/11/4 2:23 |
The Metal Shinigami (Moderator)   Joined: 2004/12/6 From: Kentucky Posts: 5149 |
Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room I agree with BB on the J and Shading but still good work.
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| 6.3 |
Posted: 2006/10/31 19:07 Updated: 2006/10/31 19:07 |
mutant   Joined: 2006/6/2 From: Brasil-SP Posts: 119 |
Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room I love Jayna. Good Work!!  |
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| MF |
Posted: 2006/10/31 13:02 Updated: 2006/10/31 13:02 |
Fanboy Extraordinaire   Joined: 2005/3/27 From: MiddleOfNowhere, Ohio Posts: 2385 |
 Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room Good work, TrekDaddy.  The costume looks great and nice job on the ear. |
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| BikerBot |
Posted: 2006/10/31 12:37 Updated: 2006/10/31 12:37 |
Mr. The Mighty Lord *Krackaboom!*   Joined: 2004/1/13 From: The Good Earth Posts: 3277 |
Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room That is a really weird pose...
You need to learn the Delete Anchor Point Tool, it's the one with the little - sign on it. On the Path you used on the inside of the letter J, if you had removed the points that made the angles you would have had a smooth circle.
Also, you need to ease up on the intensity of your dodging and burning-don't get me wrong, you are on the right track, but the shading from shadow to highlight on her left breast, for instance, is too abrupt. There needs to be more gradiation.
I hope that makes sense, feel free to ask for more elaboration.
BB
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| Dragondack |
Posted: 2006/10/30 21:44 Updated: 2006/10/30 21:44 |
The Great Eternal Dragon   Joined: 2004/2/9 From: Edmonton,Alberta,Canada Posts: 11277 |
Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room  Another Walley Wonder!  |
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| JrMcDeath |
Posted: 2006/10/30 15:40 Updated: 2006/10/30 15:40 |
Kling on HM (WebMaster!)   Joined: 2004/7/19 From: My Box Posts: 6993 |
Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room Great model. Well, maybe a little top heavy... but that doesn't bother me AT all.
Good job!
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| Billy |
Posted: 2006/10/30 13:27 Updated: 2006/10/30 13:27 |
lurks in arcades (moderator)   Joined: 2004/5/10 From: Asheville, North Carolina, USA Posts: 362 |
 Re: Jayna in the Hall of Justice Locker Room good one....i like this one alot....two for you!  |
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