thanks for the comments. I knew aout the problems with the arms, but there wasn't much I could do about that. I had kind of a narrow piece of paper to work with and I had already started drawing so I just had to fit it in.
I am really likeing the coloring on this. only grip is the arm the hand needs to be moved down about 1/4 of the arm. the forearm is too long. it shoult be the same leangth as the uper arm. Expiriment with it a little to see if that helps. personaly, I think by adjusting the arm length you will see a great improvment in the over all image.