Ninja! Good to see ya posting!
This is great.
Nice lighting, good action, I think the motion came out perfectly.
I like the shininess overtone to her outfit, too.
Great simplistic background that makes her jump right off the page!
(I would have mucked it up by over-detailing and special effects...you did an awesome job keeping the object of focus - the babe - as the object of focus!)
I agree with the angle being non-conducive to reflecting her in the windows, too.
Well done!