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Posted: 2012/11/12 18:01 Updated: 2012/11/12 18:01 |
superhero Joined: 2008/6/28 From: Posts: 496 |
Re: ms marvel No problem with your opinion. I have done over 200 images here and I think I have reached my limit. I really don't have much more I want to do with it.
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Dark Wanderer |
Posted: 2012/11/12 17:51 Updated: 2012/11/12 17:51 |
The Metal Shinigami (Moderator) Joined: 2004/12/6 From: Kentucky Posts: 5149 |
Re: ms marvel Cattle, If I came off rude, I am sorry. I was saying as my own personal opinion of what may make it look better from my point of view. You do great work and I look forward to seeing more.
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Posted: 2012/11/12 16:25 Updated: 2012/11/12 16:26 |
superhero Joined: 2008/6/28 From: Posts: 496 |
Re: ms marvel
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pijon |
Posted: 2012/11/11 18:36 Updated: 2012/11/11 18:36 |
Moderator Joined: 2006/7/18 From: United States Posts: 6363 |
Re: ms marvel First off, good to see you doing more ambitious scenes! This is cool. I like it a lot. I am seeing eye to eye with Star on this. Don't miss the motion blur and moving Ms. M ahead would add greater impact. Good job.
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StarChild |
Posted: 2012/11/11 14:09 Updated: 2012/11/11 14:09 |
Shaper of Worlds Joined: 2004/4/5 From: Matteson, Il Posts: 3909 |
Re: ms marvel i don't really have a problem with the lack of motion blur. its not really a must when trying to convey action. however i do have a problem with the robot reacting to ms. marvel's punch without it actually connecting. i think had you made her actually pass the bots it would come off better.
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cattle |
Posted: 2012/11/11 10:12 Updated: 2012/11/11 10:12 |
superhero Joined: 2008/6/28 From: Posts: 496 |
Re: ms marvel Thanks Ms. Vee.
I have an older version of poser. It can't do motion blur. I have done many previous action shots and they lack motion blur. In comic books for many years action scenes lack motion blur, so I don't see it as a problem.
I used symmetrical balance with Ms. Marvel at the center of the composition and her gold emblem, blonde hair and red sash stand out against the grays, greens and browns of robots and background. i think it makes her the focal point.
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MissVee |
Posted: 2012/11/11 9:00 Updated: 2012/11/11 9:00 |
Arch Nemesis Joined: 2003/10/20 From: Posts: 1447 |
Re: ms marvel I think it is pretty dynamic
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Dark Wanderer |
Posted: 2012/11/10 6:14 Updated: 2012/11/10 6:14 |
The Metal Shinigami (Moderator) Joined: 2004/12/6 From: Kentucky Posts: 5149 |
Re: ms marvel A good render, but it is missing Motion and a focal point. This looks like it is a Matrix freeze frame getting ready to do the 360 degree camera rotation.
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