I like that you made the whites of her eyes WHITE. And that her lips have color. Nice choice... considering that SHulkie has lip color and whites in her eyes.
In My Opinion, her hair is black with a hint of green.
Again... good.
BUT!!!! Sorry, there always seems to be a "But"... I think her skin needs to be more green. She is Green... not off-green.
I do really like the "After" much better than the "before"... but she needs to be more green.
Great job on the change!!!!!

I agree with DW and Pij, of course -- this needs more green. It is an improvement on the original, and I like the varying shades of green, but you do need to crank up the dial a bit more.

I must come out in favour of making the lips and (especially) eyes green, though. It's more faithful to the design, and can look very good if done carefully -- in a separate layer from the rest of the skin, using different/darker colours (your not doing so is the major problem with the eyes and lips in the original version) and making sure to keep the whites of the eyes as they are (they're not the greens of the eyes, after all ). Give it a shot, at least.

Good to see those PS skills coming along so well although I'm in complete agreement with DW.

Good, but don't be afraid of the green. I think this would benefit with a Happy medium between the two. And Keep the eye and lip colors. Just a personal opinion - I don't care for the green lips and eye color.