nice design and composition. my nits have been pretty much covered by everyone else although i might add that she seem a bit flat to me. working with a black figure can be tricky regardless of the background used. i would suggest that next time you introduce some highlights to the figure or perhaps make some adjustments to the surface selection.

Congrats. This image made Lady Heromorph's Top Images from the week ending March 23rd, 2013.

I would work the ambiance on the spell effect along with the opacity of it. Look at my Erutan image. it has what I am referring to. Also for the effect you are wanting to pull off, you may want to use the spell orbs and ribbons that come with the shadow caster from DAZ

thanx i appreciate the comments and the criticism
i used fxtreme for the ball and placed it through her hand somewhat intentionally kida like the energy flowing around her hand,i did place the shadown source in the ball and used it,the backrop is from a clip art site because i figured it worked on the image and the emblem on her chest isnt mine it came from heromorph lol go yunnel

Strong, simple character design and a good backstory. I like the overall feel of this image quite a lot.

That said, nitpick time: The energy ball in her han is a nice looking effect, but needs a bunch of minor adjustments to really work imo -- it's blurry, a bit too dark, has clipping issues with her hand, and should cast highlights on her body (putting a light source inside/around it might help). Also, the lightning (presumably generated by her) being behind the fence is... odd. I'd have put it immediately behind her, and probably replicated it around her hand as well. Oh, and her logo has pretty messy edges.