Np I learn from what y'all say I don't take it personally

Sorry if i came off as sounding overly critical Rich, it as not my intent. But like P said, you really didn't leave us much to go on. plus the fact that you openly admitted that you were having issues and just decided to call it quits, didn't leave me much choice here but to voice my opinion. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy seeing your posts and enjoy seeing your improvement, but we do have a gallery for unfinished works here. And if you're trying to display a certain theme or send a message in art like this..it might be a good idea to imply that initially.

actually i appreciate the comments as i learn from yall
the idea was to do something other then a person as i dont wanna be a one trick pony lol
the windows are set kinda low because the enviroment is called dance hall and the windows reach from floor to ceiling
ty again for all ur comments i do appreciate it

I hate to pile on here but...
Let me start with the good part. I like the composition here. The piano, chair, window and floor moulding break up space in an interesting way and one that's a little different from what we see here usually.
I also understand how frustrating a sluggish PC can be. It's enough to give anyone a headache.
Still, to DW and Star's points, you're not giving us much here. A piano in an empty room doesn't really qualify for any theme within the site and it's flawed. Missing textures and misplaced on the floor are easy fixes. There's also an inconsistent shading on most of the G keys. The window is also unnaturally low on the wall. The simplicity of elements in the image draws the eyes more to the mistakes. I hope you don't stop here though. I'd like to see you do more with this piano. I think a sexily posed Aiko laying on top of it while Hiro is playing it would be very cool indeed or even just a sexy Aiko playing it. I think it would also be an interesting opportunity for you to do a landscape ratio picture since I'd only noticed one (completed Inspiration Map; thank you) in your gallery.
Take it as a compliment that folks (particularly talented ones like DW and Star) take the time to critique your work You've definitely shown improvement over time. Keep going!

And yet you posted an unfinished piece in the Main Gallery anyway? Sometimes it's okay to delete an image you're not satisfied with. This ain't Facebook ya know.

My head started pounding and at the same time my laptop wasn't acting sluggish so I called it a night

that doesnt really answer the question.

Two
A headache and a laptop that is acting odd

Any reason we are looking at untextured wheels, brakes, and acoustic foot petals, or wheels that have a serious need of lifting through the floor?