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| Wolf |
Posted: 2009/1/27 3:49 Updated: 2009/1/27 3:49 |
Supreme being   Joined: 2004/3/13 From: lost somewhere in Northwest Ohio Posts: 840 |
 Re: Super Girl 2 I agree with the other comments...plus, one suggestion: Try turning the base image into ...oh, say Elasti-girl, from the Doom Patrol? Hardly ever see them represented here...  |
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| chowyspizz |
Posted: 2007/12/18 23:33 Updated: 2007/12/18 23:33 |
Ring Forger   Joined: 2007/8/23 From: Mexico Posts: 1252 |
Re: Super Girl 2 i like the models u pick man, but i think they will make a beter PowerGirl.
Super Girl is like younger and thiner.
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| Dragondack |
Posted: 2007/11/6 22:54 Updated: 2007/11/6 22:54 |
The Great Eternal Dragon   Joined: 2004/2/9 From: Edmonton,Alberta,Canada Posts: 11252 |
 Re: Super Girl 2  Well she's kinda hot even in a bathing suit like Hero outfit. |
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| JrMcDeath |
Posted: 2007/10/30 9:09 Updated: 2007/10/30 9:09 |
Kling on HM (WebMaster!)   Joined: 2004/7/19 From: My Box Posts: 6982 |
Re: Super Girl 2 MOst of my critiques have been covered... but I did want to chime in and say that this is an improvement over your last one.
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| CDA |
Posted: 2007/10/28 7:32 Updated: 2007/10/28 7:32 |
superhero   Joined: 2007/3/17 From: Toronto, ON Posts: 360 |
Re: Super Girl 2 Excellent model choice. She makes a great Supergirl. I think the costume would benefit from some folds and wrinkles. A costume will never be 100% skin tight. It's nice to see some fresh blood attempting manips. Good job on this one.
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| co_04 |
Posted: 2007/10/28 0:13 Updated: 2007/10/28 0:13 |
Hellfire Club Member   Joined: 2006/5/5 From: Posts: 831 |
Re: Super Girl 2 I'm seeing double.
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| bhm1954 |
Posted: 2007/10/26 11:03 Updated: 2007/10/26 11:03 |
Hero to the stars   Joined: 2005/7/18 From: Moses Lake, Washington Posts: 2852 |
Re: Super Girl 2 I like this much better than your first one. Great improvement. Her eyes should be blue though.
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| Shadar |
Posted: 2007/10/26 10:59 Updated: 2007/10/26 10:59 |
Gold Member   Joined: 2005/10/2 From: West by Northwest Posts: 42 |
Re: Super Girl 2 Edges of costume need to have a more substantial, thicker look. Some burn work needed.
Costume looks a bit bright/saturated compared to skin tones and not enough texture. Doesn't quite look like fabric.
Eyes should be a brighter blue.
Otherwise, a very enjoyable pict... Jennifer is a good choice for model.
Shadar
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| ajd |
Posted: 2007/10/26 8:45 Updated: 2007/10/26 8:45 |
vigilante   Joined: 2006/8/2 From: Posts: 7 |
Re: Super Girl 2 Took the bracelet off, took out the misc hair and rendered the corners a bit more.....Any other comments? Again, it is appreciated.
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| Wasmith |
Posted: 2007/10/26 8:18 Updated: 2007/10/26 8:20 |
Time Lord!   Joined: 2004/8/27 From: Knobblers Gob Posts: 2002 |
Re: Super Girl 2 1) Good choice of model. She has a good look for S-girl. But her eyes should be blue, in my opinion.
2) I like the texture on the shirt part, but it needs to be displaced (curved around the countours) a bit.
3) I like that you left off the s-shield on her chest. Don't know why.
4) She has some hair that seems to be sticking through her cape (on the right side of the picture).
5) I would have removed the bracelet. Can't see her wearing diamonds into a battle.
Hope you don't mind the nitpicks.
-W
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