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ortiz01lgnd |
Posted: 2007/7/31 13:43 Updated: 2007/7/31 13:43 |
superhero Joined: 2007/4/3 From: Fort Lauderdale Posts: 263 |
Re: Untitled I think I figured out the bent arm problem: too much of her bicep is missing. Perhaps when you cut her out of her original bg u mistook her bicep for the bg and cut it off. Look closely. Her shoulder should continue downward and be partially covered by her forearm. Thus, it looks too skinny.
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JRC4th |
Posted: 2007/7/31 2:50 Updated: 2007/7/31 2:50 |
Supreme being Joined: 2004/12/12 From: Kentucky Posts: 1000 |
Re: Untitled glad to hear you're redoing the boots.other than that,this is very excellent.
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hank |
Posted: 2007/7/29 9:39 Updated: 2007/7/29 9:39 |
vigilante Joined: 2007/7/24 From: Posts: 47 |
Re: Untitled Yeah, the left arm does look a bit off.....I kept thinking that as I was working on it, but trying to "correct" it just made it look more out of place.
I'll take another shot at it when I finish with the boots.
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JrMcDeath |
Posted: 2007/7/27 12:20 Updated: 2007/7/27 12:20 |
Kling on HM (WebMaster!) Joined: 2004/7/19 From: My Box Posts: 6993 |
Re: Untitled Yeah... what they said. Her left arm looks funny... I know it is going in a funny direction... but something about it makes it look short. Other than that... tip top... Nicely done!
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hank |
Posted: 2007/7/26 21:22 Updated: 2007/7/26 21:22 |
vigilante Joined: 2007/7/24 From: Posts: 47 |
Re: Untitled Thanks for the comments and advice!
I'm nowhere near done with this piece.....I just work in stages.
I don't like the boots either......I'm going to redo them completely.
Stay Tuned. :D
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chillyplasma |
Posted: 2007/7/26 17:48 Updated: 2007/7/26 17:48 |
Your Reality Credit Card Joined: 2005/9/18 From: Posts: 892 |
Re: Untitled This is quite good, it?s nice and clean around the hair and fingers which shows you have put some time into it. Using the pen tool is good, but if you notice e.g. where the red meets the yellow on the arm you gently need to smudge the pixilation away. The model isn?t finished, you need more shadow work and some wrinkles. If I look at her pelvis it actually looks more like her as is facing front. Good work, but you have teh skillz so I want to see you spend the time and finish the pic.
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OCP |
Posted: 2007/7/26 15:24 Updated: 2007/7/26 15:24 |
Wizard of Lasagna (Mod) Joined: 2007/5/20 From: From the Other Side of the Ocean Posts: 3461 |
Re: Untitled Whoau!!! What an amazing pic. Like it even better with background. Great work!!! 10 from me!!!
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ortiz01lgnd |
Posted: 2007/7/26 5:58 Updated: 2007/7/26 5:59 |
superhero Joined: 2007/4/3 From: Fort Lauderdale Posts: 263 |
Re: Untitled So nice, I had to comment twice.... Yeah, soundz corny, but hey! Ne way. The best things about this manip are 1) the way you perfectly used the pen tool ( I know, already commented on by Bikerbot) especially around the fingers on her right hand and how you colored her thigh between them....BEEE-U-TEE-Ful! The other thing I like is the flawless emblem/design/belly cut-out on her outfit. The lines are so crisp, even and perfectly shaped around her breasts, stomach, and inner hips that I'm jealous. Again, great job. The boots however, I'm not all that crazy about. They just look a bit off to me. But otherwise, amazing. Keep em coming.
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GNOMERAGE |
Posted: 2007/7/26 3:15 Updated: 2007/7/26 3:16 |
vigilante Joined: 2007/1/2 From: In his Gnome hole chillin' Posts: 34 |
Re: Untitled Damn do I love red heads! Alicia Witt looks smokin' hot in that outfit. Keep up the awesome work hank.
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Dragondack |
Posted: 2007/7/25 20:25 Updated: 2007/7/25 20:25 |
The Great Eternal Dragon Joined: 2004/2/9 From: Edmonton,Alberta,Canada Posts: 11277 |
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CDA |
Posted: 2007/7/25 17:06 Updated: 2007/7/25 17:06 |
superhero Joined: 2007/3/17 From: Toronto, ON Posts: 360 |
Re: Untitled This is nice work... It at least deserves a title(although "Untitled" could be considered a title). Anyway... good stuff.
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hank |
Posted: 2007/7/25 16:10 Updated: 2007/7/25 16:10 |
vigilante Joined: 2007/7/24 From: Posts: 47 |
Re: Untitled Thanks for all the comments!
The background is a bit plain, but I just used the one from the base pic.....there are a few more things I want to try with this, so we'll see what happens :D
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MF |
Posted: 2007/7/25 15:29 Updated: 2007/7/25 15:29 |
Fanboy Extraordinaire Joined: 2005/3/27 From: MiddleOfNowhere, Ohio Posts: 2385 |
Re: Untitled Great costume design and perfect model choice! (Wonder why Alicia hasn't done a superhero movie yet? She certainly has the comic book babe look going for her.)
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bhm1954 |
Posted: 2007/7/25 9:08 Updated: 2007/7/25 9:08 |
Hero to the stars Joined: 2005/7/18 From: Moses Lake, Washington Posts: 2852 |
Re: Untitled Wow! This is beautiful. Great job on this (although it could use a different background).
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ortiz01lgnd |
Posted: 2007/7/25 9:07 Updated: 2007/7/25 9:07 |
superhero Joined: 2007/4/3 From: Fort Lauderdale Posts: 263 |
Re: Untitled Amazing job!
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BikerBot |
Posted: 2007/7/25 1:07 Updated: 2007/7/25 1:07 |
Mr. The Mighty Lord *Krackaboom!* Joined: 2004/1/13 From: The Good Earth Posts: 3277 |
Re: Untitled Wow, I saw this in the queue, and I had to release it. Please read the Posting Policy email or PM which you received, when you respond to it you will be removed from queue status and your posts will go up automatically.
This is really great! You obviously understand the Pen Tool, good on ya.
I say this a lot around here, but still- Welcome To Heromorph!
Let's see more!
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