Actually he's not that far off. Voltt's costume is more or less ultra-thin vulcanized rubber which I doubt would produce very many wrinkles. But I do understand your critique of this picture. . We want to help others get better.
It looks more like painted skin then a costume. Try to add in more contrast to the costume and other details like separation shadow and most importantly Wrinkles. Still you are getting better.
I can not beleive this! Webgeek! You have got some nerve! I f you think you can win the respect and admiration of Unicorn Comics by being the first person other than a Unicorn member to do a manip of our characters. Well then buddy let me tell you this. YOU HAVE! YOU HAVE! YOU HAVE! I love it, not so much for the manipulation job but for the honor. Thank you.