Hey All:

What is this Heromorph Triathalon? I clicked the Contest Rules link and it just reloaded the home page.

Thanks for all the comments, keep em coimg. I was worried people wouldn't get what the HeroMorph product placement was.
The Bat cape idea didn't work out as well as I had hoped. I'm attempting to ink the image and it has been replaced so stay tuned.
I don't want to colour it because I hate my colouring jobs but don't let that stop anyone else.
I tried to measure every part of her to keep things even but even then. The reason one arm is shorter in because her left is meant to on a higher angle but still misscalculated.
At one point her skirt was so short that you did see what see had on underneath but seeing Supergirls panties doesn't seem right to me, although I do like short skirts and off the hip

The hands really are one of the strongest parts of the picture. That and the eyes, although they look a bit too michael turner for my personal tastes. I agree with the critiques on the arm length. A quick and easy way to prevent that problem is to just measure one arm against your pencil, mark of the distance with you thumb and hold it up against the other arm. If there's a big difference you know you have a problem. One more nit to pick, her legs are to straight. from the front the legs should have a bit more of a capital "B" shape to them, where the lower leg actually curves a little bit inward. Yours here are very staight up and down and it gives the impression she's a bit knock kneed. Still the face is really strong and the over all picture is really easy on the eyes.

Very nice! I like how your lines have become darker, more confident. The hands are awesome! Now we just need to get this piece inked and colored!

As a nitpick, the only thing I can find is what Wasmith already said. Her left arm (our right) the bicep is too thin.

I really like this!

I like it, I think this is a very good drawing. The bat shaped cape looks a little strange on Supergirl and the skirt looks like if it shifted it could slide right off of her, but the hands look nice.

Overall I think you did a great job.

This is one of the best sketches you have posted here. Well done!

I admit I don't like the cape, I can't see a good reason for it to be in the bat configuration, although I understand why you left it that way from your comments.

One nitpick - her left bicep is weird. It's a bit thin... It needs to be fixed.

I'm trying to figure out how she could possibly be wearing anything under that skirt.... pervert that I am.

I like it, i agree you should color it.

Well the hand are pretty well done, i like it a lot
specially the idea of the bat cape
u should color it and mess with blacks