I have to say I like this version better.

Actually Pijon thnx for the heads up on the pose, Pokethrough don't really bother, I have done major pokethrough repairs with Photoshop... who knows I like what I visualized in my mind when reading the pose description... don't actual problem is to get Lux to run again, it crashes 4 out of 5 times, this is a combo of a lux render and Daz render.,.. a little tip i got from DW...

nice rework.

She's a great looking character and you can never go wrong with a Stonemason set. I like the way the shadow hits the stairs. I do find the pose a bit too symmetrical and stiff though. I think this pose would benefit greatly just by a number of small tweaks... say a slight twist of abdomen and/or chest which would lead to a slight twist of the more forward shoulder and a slight bend of that forearm which you would counterbalance by moving the opposing side's thigh slightly backward, etc. I realize that dress's poke-thru potential might keep you from doing anything extreme with the pose but I think a few subtle tweaks would go a long way. Still, good job.