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Main : ! 3D Art ! : Original Characters :  The Fall of Malice

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The Fall of Malice
The Fall of MalicePopular
SubmitterObsidianMore Photos from Obsidian   Last Update2014/12/6 2:24
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...The shock on her face would be priceless if I could see it, as I catch her Psi-blade with my gauntleted hand and run her through with my sword. Falling to her knees she releases her blade and it drops to the ground. I kick it away and turn to grab my armor and that’s when she crosses the line.

“I should have killed your whore and your two bastards when I had the chance. Run while you can I will find you and I will slaughter your woman and children while you watch helplessly!”

The words stop me dead in my tracks. I look at Anihilus who just hangs his head, I would have spared his sister out of respect for him, but he knows I can’t do that now. He simply looks away as I turn around to face Malice.

“You stupid bitch,” I say incredulously, “I would have let you live. Why couldn't you just shut the fuck up?”  



An excerpt from chapters to come.

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StarChild
Posted: 2014/12/9 1:59  Updated: 2014/12/9 1:59
Shaper of Worlds
Joined: 2004/4/5
From: Matteson, Il
Posts: 3909
 Re: The Fall of Malice
okay. i can accept that.
pijon
Posted: 2014/12/8 19:07  Updated: 2014/12/8 19:07
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Posts: 6363
 Re: The Fall of Malice
Great job on characters and scene. Well done!
Obsidian
Posted: 2014/12/7 21:44  Updated: 2014/12/7 21:46
Henchman
Joined: 2012/12/23
From: Columbus Indiana
Posts: 1115
 Re: The Fall of Malice
Thanks for the feedback but I should explain a couple of things. First of all I honestly could NOT get that damn cape to hit properly on the floor so I plunged it into it. With her legs it was the same thing it just didn't squish to conform to the floor and looked like it was hovering. As for the clean sword...I'm giving away a bit here...It's an enchanted blade...one of the most powerful in that universe, a relic of incredible power in fact and neither blood nor any other substance can stain it or cause the slightest blemish but I will cover that in the story. I would have added a glow but I didn't want any confusion with it's alternate energy setting.
StarChild
Posted: 2014/12/7 16:21  Updated: 2014/12/7 16:21
Shaper of Worlds
Joined: 2004/4/5
From: Matteson, Il
Posts: 3909
 Re: The Fall of Malice
A very interesting bit of dialogue here. Sounds like there's quite a bit of background to this image that should make for good reading. The image itself is nice but could be better. The cape and legs sinking into the ground are distracting [something you should make a point of double-checking before final posts] and while there's a lot of blood spilling from Malice...her killer's sword is remarkably clean?


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