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chowyspizz |
Posted: 2007/9/17 17:57 Updated: 2007/9/17 17:57 |
Ring Forger Joined: 2007/8/23 From: Mexico Posts: 1252 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham totally impressive, i like taht kinda metallic look
maybe u could make it a bit more night
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Raddar |
Posted: 2007/1/1 17:39 Updated: 2007/1/1 17:39 |
superhero Joined: 2006/3/9 From: Houston Posts: 303 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham This is freaking incredible.
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Proudwulf |
Posted: 2005/8/8 13:37 Updated: 2005/8/8 13:37 |
mutant Joined: 2005/2/28 From: Panama City, Florida Posts: 177 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Holly Hips Batman will you look at those legs
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VampireLover |
Posted: 2005/4/16 9:11 Updated: 2005/4/16 9:11 |
Seductress of Sin (real life Babe) Joined: 2005/2/20 From: Hottest Depths of Hell Posts: 2223 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham great pose and background for Batgirl!
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BikerBot |
Posted: 2004/7/5 19:24 Updated: 2004/7/5 19:24 |
Mr. The Mighty Lord *Krackaboom!* Joined: 2004/1/13 From: The Good Earth Posts: 3277 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Welcome To Heromorph! (Hee hee!)
I agree with the comments below, pluses are the bronze glow to it all, and a very nice background!, minuse are some edge work, etc.
Keep it up!
BB
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SilverAgeMage |
Posted: 2004/7/3 20:55 Updated: 2004/7/3 20:55 |
superhero Joined: 2004/5/17 From: Pittsburgh area Posts: 452 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Welcome aboard, Cmeza! Very nice first morph. I liked how you left the empty space on the left- good design. Your rendering of Batgirl is nice. More, please!
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Dragondack |
Posted: 2004/7/1 21:18 Updated: 2004/7/1 21:18 |
The Great Eternal Dragon Joined: 2004/2/9 From: Edmonton,Alberta,Canada Posts: 11277 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Welcome,You seem to be off to a great start & if that's Daisy she looks pretty nice.
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cmeza |
Posted: 2004/7/1 10:53 Updated: 2004/7/1 10:53 |
Kryptonite Sculptor Joined: 2004/6/30 From: Santiago, Chile Posts: 161 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham To All Thanks a million for the comments /suggestions. Though I am in principle a little on the old school side and not inclined to redos (like any other piece of art once you consider it done you should stand by it and improve on the next one), I find your comments so constructive I'm seriously considering bending my rule on this one. Regardless if I get to repost it or not your comments are much appreciated and will be taken into account. Again , thanks a bunch and stand by, other manips are in the works
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Winterhawk |
Posted: 2004/7/1 10:42 Updated: 2004/7/1 10:42 |
Guardian of the Great White North (Webmaster) Joined: 2003/8/17 From: Canada Posts: 6812 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Welcome To Heromorph. This is a great first picture, I look forward to seeing more. Freshmut has pretty much covered everything that could be improved on the picture. I would just like to add that Batgirl should also be casting a shadow against the building behind her as the light source seems to be coming from in front of her.
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Kallisti |
Posted: 2004/7/1 7:16 Updated: 2004/7/1 7:16 |
superhero Joined: 2004/3/2 From: Posts: 438 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham i agree with everything that's been said, but i'd like to add that i really like the gold-ish color you used for her boots and gloves and stuff. really nice.
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Freshmutt |
Posted: 2004/7/1 3:44 Updated: 2004/7/1 3:44 |
Hellfire Club Member Joined: 2003/10/21 From: Posts: 184 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham I think that you are off to such a good start that this is worth a re-do.
I agree with the other comments. The cape could stand some more contrast - make the darks darker. The median filter could make it more painty. The gloves are an easy fix, and a little transparensy may keep the emblem from floating. If that doesn't work, make a layer with batgirl's chest above the emblem and multiply it - this should transfer the shadows from her... um... utilities... onto the bat.
If you do all this, I would also suggest erasing that little moon and finding a pic of a big full moon to fill up that empty space. I also think the rope is a little ordinary and old looking for bat-gear. One last nit-pick - her right foot looks firmly planted, but her left looks like it's out in front of the ledge. Erase the tip of her heel and shave a bit off of the ball of her foot to make it appear behind the edge of the ledge.
Don't get me wrong, I love this manip, otherwise I wouldn't say so much about it.
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soccerkd11 |
Posted: 2004/7/1 1:15 Updated: 2004/7/1 1:15 |
sidekick Joined: 2004/2/1 From: you mean that we have to actually BE somewhere? Posts: 56 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham I know I should post before I critique. But this is really good. So I figure pointing out one or two things won't harm your ego. I mean this is amazing. The only thing I noticed, is most of you picture has a painting/drawing feel. It feels like it isn't a photograph,(wich I think is really cool) but the cape doesn't really match the style of the rest of the painting. The cape looks like a photograph. the only real way to tell is around the edges or and of the Sharp lins on the cape.
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cmeza |
Posted: 2004/6/30 23:12 Updated: 2004/6/30 23:12 |
Kryptonite Sculptor Joined: 2004/6/30 From: Santiago, Chile Posts: 161 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham good point about the logo ... suggestions? thaks for the welcome
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cmeza |
Posted: 2004/6/30 23:10 Updated: 2004/6/30 23:10 |
Kryptonite Sculptor Joined: 2004/6/30 From: Santiago, Chile Posts: 161 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Doh! Ok, now I'm embarrassed. Will pay better attention next time I do bats :oops: thanks for the comment!
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BatMic |
Posted: 2004/6/30 22:51 Updated: 2004/6/30 22:51 |
Hellfire Club Member Joined: 2004/1/29 From: Scotland Posts: 408 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham very nice, a little rough in places. i don't know if you realise but you've got the spines on her gloves pointing in the wrong direction minor point but one any geekboy would notice. cool pic!
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Dark_Knight_DK |
Posted: 2004/6/30 22:39 Updated: 2004/6/30 22:39 |
Bat Junkie...and who took my meds??? Joined: 2003/8/18 From: Mexico City (we don't wear hats) Posts: 2621 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham Really nice, welcome to our club... my only comment is the bat logo... it looks like it's floating
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Billy |
Posted: 2004/6/30 21:59 Updated: 2004/6/30 21:59 |
lurks in arcades (moderator) Joined: 2004/5/10 From: Asheville, North Carolina, USA Posts: 362 |
Re: lonely knight in Gotham i like it...it really very good. Daisy has always been pretty hot...
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