BILLY...Billy...billy.... Nice image... remember the stroke thing I told you about... you need to erase some of the white in the dark areas to make the higlight more believeable. But it is FINE all the same.
Wow, Billy this is a whole new style for you, It's pretty cool and really unique. It's kinda remainds me of commercial illustration from the early 20th century. Just a little more complexity in tones and you are golden. Way to push yourself buddy.