CHALLENGE: Block Buster Reboot
 Machobubba  2013/7/14 5:18
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Sam Wilson: From “Falcon” to “The Hawk”…
After being beat to a pulp, by the Hulk in one of his Temper Tantrums, the hero known as Falcon, was badly hurt and he was not going to walk or fly, for that matter, ever again. So while he sat back at his apartment in a Wheelchair, he could only think about revenge, but due to his condition that was never going to happen, moments of despair and pain where his everyday lifestyle, but evil always wants to conquer over good, so, a villain known as Dormammu, decided to take advantage of Sam Wilson's condition to turn him, to the dark side, so he made a guest appearance at Wilson's apartment with an offer to recover him from his present state of lifestyle so he could avenge himself, offer that Wilson could not refuse. Dormammu show's him a "Red and Black Ring", vaguely familiar to some "Green Ring" used over at some other universe. Dormammu told him that “with this "Ring" he will be a new being”, and he can avenge himself but the offer consisted of Sam Wilson giving his soul to Dormammu, and keeping the ring on, permanently!, because the moment he would take it off he would return to his battered self immediately and die within 24 hours, this way giving him a chance to recover it if it were stolen, "Yeah like if in his battered and beat up form he would actually have a chance to recover the ring"; but as we all know, evil is evil, and there were things that Dormammu left out like, how is he gonna become a new being?, or how tight does that "Red and Black Ring" really fit?, things that he would know once he put the "Ring" on, oh and one more thing, says Dormammu, “Due to Copyright infringement you no longer can be called Falcon, you shall be called The Hawk.” Sam’s face ¿? Okay? I guess. Sam proceeds to put the “Ring” on, once it reaches its destination on the finger, it literally soldered to his finger and he started hurting horribly, in ways that only could be compared to the continued smashes on him from The Hulk, against the rock’s that destroyed him and left him paralyzed, he felt movement coming to his legs and then, more pain and his legs and arms transformed into 3 fingered limbs, his face started really hurting as it too changed into the shape of a hawk, Dormammu summons a mirror and “The Hawk” sees his self and all he can say is “I’m hideous and I’m white”, Dormammu then laughs maniacally in an evil voice, and says “Vengeance is a very, very, ugly thing”.
On a separate note, the abilities of this “Red and Black Ring” are basically the same as the “Green Ring” used over at the DC Universe, with the exception that the objects that are formed with this “Ring” are red and black. How did Dormammu come across it? DC Comic’s “Lucifer”...
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| MsV |
Posted: 2013/7/19 2:50 Updated: 2013/7/19 2:50 |
superhero   Joined: 2008/6/11 From: Posts: 439 |
 Re: CHALLENGE: Block Buster Reboot Great idea (and ambitious) to use a series of comic panels to introduce your story!
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| StarChild |
Posted: 2013/7/18 0:44 Updated: 2013/7/18 0:44 |
Shaper of Worlds   Joined: 2004/4/5 From: Matteson, Il Posts: 3909 |
 Re: CHALLENGE: Block Buster Reboot a very offbeat concept with a macabre undertone. you mentioned a that this about revenge..against the Hulk? I dunno. I think I would leave well enough alone.  He's hasn't even faced greenskin again and look what it's cost him. question: if he's got the power of a lantern and they are able to fly. why the bird wing costume? unless of course the wings are now real. whoa! |
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| pijon |
Posted: 2013/7/14 17:20 Updated: 2013/7/14 17:20 |
Moderator   Joined: 2006/7/18 From: United States Posts: 6363 |
Re: CHALLENGE: Block Buster Reboot Oh wow!  I can really see why this took you a while! Awesome job, MB! The series of panels goes well with the origin story, which is both dramatic and interesting. I find the mystical dimensional crossover between Marvel and DC a very appealing idea as well. Excellent!  |
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| WebGeek |
Posted: 2013/7/14 5:37 Updated: 2013/7/14 5:37 |
superhero  Joined: 2004/12/8 From: PA- USA Posts: 368 |
Re: CHALLENGE: Block Buster Reboot Interesting Character Choice. And a dark tale of vengeance - and yes - ugliness. All put together well!
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