other than the 'weak' scan 'n' pasting [uneven] this is great. unless of course the uneveness was done on purpose which in turn makes my previous comment unwarranted. lotta uneven words i just used too.
Man, I love this layout and the crazy way the sounds entangle with the image. The sense of action is really kinetic and palpable here and your style really rocks too... lots of cool detail! Great stuff!