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Darkwinter999 |
Posted: 2007/10/14 11:31 Updated: 2007/10/14 11:31 |
superhero Joined: 2007/3/10 From: the Shadow World Posts: 492 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 Zantana must be on editting.
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JrMcDeath |
Posted: 2007/10/9 9:05 Updated: 2007/10/9 9:05 |
Kling on HM (WebMaster!) Joined: 2004/7/19 From: My Box Posts: 6993 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 Everybody else is on the ground having fun while this crazy bitch is still flying around shooting anything that flies. She would be a welcome part of my hunting group... our motto "If it flies it dies" It did take me a while to figure out the dialog... but the picture is pretty.
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Dragondack |
Posted: 2007/10/7 21:12 Updated: 2007/10/7 21:12 |
The Great Eternal Dragon Joined: 2004/2/9 From: Edmonton,Alberta,Canada Posts: 11277 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 BOY thems alotta words up there?
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Masterchief |
Posted: 2007/10/5 11:37 Updated: 2007/10/5 11:37 |
Gold Member Joined: 2004/8/8 From: If you don't know by now don't ask! Posts: 1108 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 Left to right and top to bottom!!! GOT IT!!! I didn't notice that until you guys said something I will make sure that it doesn't happen again. and for all you Zatanna fans you will see her in the final act so don't worry!!
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OCP |
Posted: 2007/10/5 10:03 Updated: 2007/10/5 10:03 |
Wizard of Lasagna (Mod) Joined: 2007/5/20 From: From the Other Side of the Ocean Posts: 3461 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 I agree, the word ballons are a bit confusing, but I really like the all panel story. And, yes, I'm glad Zatanna survived. Now, let's see some future pics with her, please, please.
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bhm1954 |
Posted: 2007/10/5 9:59 Updated: 2007/10/5 9:59 |
Hero to the stars Joined: 2005/7/18 From: Moses Lake, Washington Posts: 2852 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 Great images, but I agree, the word balloons were out of place. Wow, Nightmother is a lot more evil than I thought.
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Winterhawk |
Posted: 2007/10/5 8:16 Updated: 2007/10/5 8:16 |
Guardian of the Great White North (Webmaster) Joined: 2003/8/17 From: Canada Posts: 6812 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 OK bud, the images are good and the story is good. But man, here people read from left to right and from top to bottom...the placement of you word bubbles and the order you put them in is hugely important when making a comic. The first thing you want someone to read in a panel should be top left not bottom right. very confusing shit bro.
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Desslar |
Posted: 2007/10/5 3:50 Updated: 2007/10/5 3:50 |
vigilante Joined: 2004/2/5 From: Gammalon City, Gammalon Posts: 39 |
Re: Smackdown round 4 part 1 Masterchief, Nightmother knows that Zatanna is okay and she still decides to take out Lady Heromorph's airforce?! I LOVE IT! That is viciously cool! Good job! Oh, by the way, I'm glad you did not kill off Zatanna! Good eye candy in fishnet stockings is hard to find these days! Desslar
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