The overall effect is the usual JLong awesomeness, but the posing is problematic. If I try and break it down, WW's head should be much closer to Apex's (no room for that beautiful, flowing hair!), and then you would have had more room for the trap and delt (and the position of the right arm would make more sense). Also, there is no way Apex's bicep could have fitted between WW's bicep and forearm that way (unless our Amazonian princess has been raiding Ralph Dibny's secret Gingold stash
); it should go much higher.