Wow! I continue to be increasingly impressed by your work, Redd! This is awesome! The story plays out well through the scene, the anatomies, linework and outfits are all terrific and there is a great sense of drama. The poses are excellent as well and so are the expressions of the two women. IMO, I think you might be better served to have the male Jedi have either a surprised look or grimace of pain rather than just a stern expression... but of course, that's still your call as you clearly know what you're doing here. This is really outstanding work!
Very much looking forward to seeing the finished version!