frankly i wouldnt bother with the inks unless you're planning on coloring it. if you wanna darken it more just go back into PS and try multiplying the image a time or 2.

I think you should ink it with plenty of ink, and maybe ink shading lines?

I would agree. stronger black. but i like this.

NICE!!! If you can't handle a little Crit... quit reading now.


I would ink it. BUT, you didn't do.... Hold on....

This is a fantastic image!

Ok... back to the Crit. ...But you didn't do the 4B justice. I would get into this drawing and REALLY make the blacks, well, Black. Once you get into the "B"s you should get jet black pencil lines.
I did this image in all "B" pencils... get your lines BLACK!
1987 MikeJFox

Like his traps (Trapezius) I would make the edges jet black and where they roll up to the peak, make sure to erase and get a brite white highlite. This image needs to really show that he is black and shiny white.

I keep editing my post....

And his crotch, it should be jet black and work out from there. And the inside of his mouth... Jet Black. I need to find my pencils.

Did I mention that I really like this? You seem to really have a grasp on the anatomy of this image....