Thanks for those fun replies, Dragondack and Drunkendragon!
Actually, it's Jean Michel Jarre but who even knows what that guy looks like. Even I think it looks like John Lennon so why not Randy Newman?
I think you nailed it, Drunkendragon: "crisper and cleaner"! Thanks! Just what I was going for. The pencils have some things going on in spots but they're uneven, sketchy and incomplete. I don't think I would ever do such a brutal job of changing details if it was someone else's pencils I was inking!
...and both of your vids had me in stitches!