Sexy wetlook WW. Love it!

Big improvement, this is miles beyond your Nightwing picture. You really are coming along rather quickly. Other then Optical????????s sage advice, the only suggestion I have for you this time is to take your time. Practice. Look at the time you spent on this manip. Triple it for the next one. And then double that for the one after that. Once you become familiar with the program that you are using, Manips become easier and easier and your time spent on doing basic manips will drop considerably and the quality will increase. Don????????t get me wrong, for a beginner your work is great. Look at some of my first pictures (they truly sucked) if you ever want some encouragement. Keep it up and practice, you are doing great so far.

WW as fantom, just kidding, I like it!

This is really good. Excellent gold effect (looks kind of like the water is reflected in it).
I would just like to see you put in the extra effort your pics deserve. Things like the star on her tiara and the earring are worth including.

Keep it up man.

Time to get techincal:
Your linework needs some tightening up. Too fuzzy around the edges. Try finding tutorials for the pen/paths tool online, it's a great way to create sharp yet adjustable selections.
I like the drop shadows under her belt and breastplate, but you missed the one that should be under the tiara.
The metal on her belt should have a strong highlight on the same side as the one on her breastplate.
A decent effort overall, keep it up.

Prof. Optical - look what I did for Wrinklehawk....

As you can easily tell by my lack of post, I am not a manipulator (yet). so All I could do is point out areas to work on, I wouldn't know what to do.

On the right side of her (hem) chest, it doesn't reall look like fabric, it just looks like a red painted skin. The panties are too blury, there is no definate edge that you would expect from fabric. Excellent metal work, but the reflection/light source doesn't reall match on her belt with her chest.

I want to say that this is better than anything I have done, and bravo for putting it out there.