That's some hot sh** you posted there; I bet you think your hot sh** for posting it... well you'd be right!
I said this to another artist on this site and I will say it again here (or at least something similar) I'm sure there a some technical problems with this piece (not to say I expect there to be mind you) but whatever they are the pale in comparison to the picture as a whole.
I'm sure you want to better your self as an artist and critisim is a way of doing that but if someone finds something wrong with this pic "screw them" I say you're "Sh** is hot"
(Hey on no sh** jokes just comment on the work, Please
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