Dark Wanderer wrote: maybe if you hade the shadows on the part of her face closest to us.
I did intend for the near side of her face to also be shadowed but I didn't want to have so much black on the face so I planned on doing the shadows there with coloring. I tried to leave sort of a shadow guideline or highlight line to remind myself of where it is.
I like what you did with the inking on this. only thing that gets me is the lighting on the womans face with the shadowing you have going on maybe if you hade the shadows on the part of her face closest to us. But I snagged it and will give it a go at coloring for you