Concerning all 3 pages...this is incredible work. The detail work is awesome, and you weren't afraid to remove the clothing as it should be, in a violent transformation as this.
Wonderful series! I hope your client liked this...
At first she seemed to be in great pain, but as the transformation progressed she seemed to get into it. Overall this reminds me of the transformation sequence in "American Werewolf in London" with a little "Thriller" thrown in..
She sure must have a huge clothing budget... I noticed that on page 3 you covered (censored?) part of her breasts with cloth bits, but later on you showed her breasts with nothing hiding them. Was this intentional?