Really awesome looking character... wow, a cyborg elf... I didn't see that one coming!
The tilted view can be a really cool effect but IMO, I don't think it's working so well for you here... I feel like I have to tilt my head to the side to compensate. The composition itself is very strong overall though and I really like the way the ramp and rails pull you to the character then the eyes travel past to the door and down the length. It gives a really good sense of depth. You do a good job of using the set to your advantage. As I said, the character looks awesome! That flame sword is bad ass! Like the robo-arm rigging too... great idea and it looks great too (although it does look like it needs to come forward just a little). Overall, most impressive stuff, O!