This Image made Lady Heromorph's Top Images of the Week ending February 20th, 2010. Congrats.

Don't worry, Wyldstaar, I've been drawing sequential comics professionally for a bunch of years. This is the first page of a series of sequential pages....this first page was to get my feet wet, so to speak, doing aliens and spaceships....

Hugs,

-- Jinky

I really want to see this colored
Great job!

Incredibly cool, Jinky and this is just the black and white version!

Very complex composition. I always like to see your inks before colouring. For the rest of us struggling artists here -- it both inspires and intimidates!

Hey Jinky!

I'll add one comment to the above stuff. Lucas is pretty strict about continuity, so unless you're making a new alien species, I'd remove those two wispy thin head tails and remove the reptiley skin details from the thick ones on your heroine. Assuming she's a Twi'lek, they only have the two thick ones you've given her and definitely aren't scaly at all.

That said, a great boldly dynamic image as always!

From a purely coolness point of view, I think it's great. Lots of action, great characterization, great art.

From the perspective of a showpiece to present to a comic book publisher, this is exactly what you shouldn't do. This is a splash page, which is the easiest form of comic artwork. If you are wanting to show off the goods, you need to display your ability to tell a story in panel form. Making an awesome rescue scene look visually interesting is easy. Making a scene where people are standing around having a conversation visually interesting is hard.

My suggestion would be to find an old Marvel Star Wars comic, and re-draw a sequence. Keep the story, but use a different panel arangement and your own art.