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Main : ! 3D Art ! : Original Characters :  Uncomfortable Silence redux

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Uncomfortable Silence redux
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SubmitterObsidianMore Photos from Obsidian   Last Update2017/9/29 18:54
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The silence is uncomfortable so I muster up the courage and decide break it. Cheetahs going to be with us till we find Panterra and I cant operate under this kind of stress. I clear my throat, slightly embarrassed by how loud it seems,

"Can we talk about what happened? I mean, I said I was sorry what more can I do?"

"After what you pulled, I am surprised you would expect me to say anything to you at all."

"Look Chee- Uh- Sarah, you know I never meant for us to get serious like that? I mean, I travel all across the five galaxies and you do the superhero thing here on Earth. I just dont see how it would have worked."

"How can you not see? I could'veI could've come with you, I would have given up everything. I thought you felt the same way.  Or were you just stringing me along?"

"I wasn't stringing you along. I just knew where this was all headed.  We fall in love, settle down, and raise a family. Then eventually I get to watch you all grow old and die while I carry on? I did that once before and I just don't have the strength to go through it again."

"I can't help that you're a damn Elf and that youll live forever. All I know is how I feel and I care very deeply for you. I though you cared for me too. Do you?"

I dont answer I just hang my head, I do care.  

Yeah," she says sharply,  "Thats what I thought.

Her words sting like an arrow, and I have nothing to say because I know shes right. She makes me want to grow old with her but that's an impossibility we Luminesti don't grow old, and save for misfortune, we don't die either. I can see this talk was a bad idea so I return to the awkward silence.



This is a complete reshoot, with new lighting and using the current Obsidian sculpt and scaling. I'd like some feedback on this one if anyone would be so kind...any critique would be welcomed.
The original can be founbd here: http://heromorph.com/heromorph2/modules/myalbum4/photo.php?lid=22923&cid=106

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Lady Heromorph
Posted: 2017/10/15 10:48  Updated: 2017/10/15 10:48
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 Re: Uncomfortable Silence redux
Congratulations! You've made top images for the Second Week of October, 2017
Dragondack
Posted: 2017/9/30 18:08  Updated: 2017/9/30 18:08
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 Re: Uncomfortable Silence redux
pijon
Posted: 2017/9/30 12:12  Updated: 2017/9/30 16:11
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 Re: Uncomfortable Silence redux
Yeah, you capture that discomfort of a breakup reunion quite well in this segment.
Okay, you asked for it...
As far as the image re-do, I think both are quite good but there are things I don't like in both as well. I find the overdone bump mapping in Obsidian's face the most distracting part of the original. In the redo, there are definite improvements in the lighting and composition however while Obsidian's hair has a more natural texture, it feels tacked on afterwards (maybe that odd black shadow at the top?) and the his shadow on his chair is too sharp for the lighting and needs to softened. Also, since the main focus is on the two characters, they feel a little left of center without the holographic screen to add additional compositional weight. Looks like the camera could shift slightly left or better still, shift right slightly and pan left. Lastly, it seems like there may be some funky things going on with the focus. It is particularly evident on Obsidian's left leg where it shifts from a pretty sharp focus above the knee to pretty blurry below.

BTW, check yr PMs. I sent ya a question.